David Vanderson <xxxxxx@gmail.com> wrote:
> First attempt attached.  Please let me know if I'm going in a decent direction.

Since you said "First attempt", I'm assuming that you're going to make some further changes and then submit it, which is fine.

If that's not your intent, and you want me to just start by accepting and then editing this, that's fine too.  Just let me know.

I think it'd be easier to take smaller changes and do them incrementally, where we can.

--- David A. Wheeler