On Tue, Sep 8, 2020 at 11:44 AM <xxxxxx@ancell-ent.com> wrote:
 
Very good.  Except you're going to hate me, I just noticed an extraneous comma in the sentence before it:

Fixed. 
 
These changes plus your extra bolding warning look great, zap the comma and I say it's ready for Arthur.

I'll work on it soon.