I think if the second draft is ready for general public view it should
be published on the SRFI website. It's easier to read than having to
download the HTML file off of the git host to read it.

Some minor things skimming it:

1. The code examples should be wrapped with <pre> so that they indent
correctly.
2. `define-method` should be renamed because it is not a definition form
in the way that regular `define` is.
3.  `average uses a quasiquote, which is fine but a little odd.
4. There is still some boilerplate text under the section "Private
Messages".

-- Peter McGoron